The Art of Attraction

I heard it said once
That attractive to an artist
Does not mean "pretty"
In the average sense
But more something that
Is interesting to look at
And makes you want to 
Keep looking

To him, I can look for hours
And want to keep looking

He is the color burnt umber
Like coffee and cream
And purest black ink
Not blue-black, or brown,
But the undiluted purity
Of a spilled ink-pot
Shaped by the delicate curve
Of a calligraphy brush
Into perfectly, haphazardly
Beautiful curls, erratic and
Bold

And his eyes
Those eyes
Like coffee, taken
Without cream or sugar
But turned amber by sunlight
And sweetened by laughter
Making what might have been
Intimidating, with their darkly
Charcoaled outline that 
Marks them as Arab
Instead as sweetly inviting
As the warm half-light of dusk
And so addictive

I've been looking for hours
And I want to keep looking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Phookan Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Your first poem here is quite an attractive write, needs another read.. Congrats Cameron on your well deserved win!
Onclaud Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 5:30 PM
dripping with fantastic imagery.. kudos to you for a fine win, caneron!.... huggs
Mehta Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 8:27 PM
Enjoyed your first write and congrats on the win, Cameron
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 6:22 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 5:41 PM
I agree with you. So beautifully described! Congrats, Cameron!
Puddifoot Avatar
January 28, 2014 at 5:15 PM
and I want to keep looking too! this is a wonderful free verse poem, beautiful unique description; I had it marked for a high placement from the first time I read it - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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November 19, 2013 at 11:08 PM
Cameron, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 17, 2013 at 4:42 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Cameron! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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November 17, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Cameron, hope you find what you are in need of... love the passion expressed..., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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