The Armada

Tether,
Untightened
with frugality
The message. 

Pounce.
Patter.
Or none of the
Above.

Nontheless,
The war room
should receive
this visit.

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Goff Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 7:30 PM
just had to add...like the message in last stanza!
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March 31, 2010 at 7:29 PM
this one goes to my fav's! might as well fav poet while I'm at it! jamesy
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March 30, 2010 at 3:12 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ian. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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