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The Argument

The Argument
“Hello, What’s up?”
Blood hot, Pulse fast.
“You know,” “I don’t!”
“You do!” “I don’t!”
“Tell me.” “You know!”
“Calm down!” “I’m calm!”
“You’re not.” “I am.”
“You must Breathe slow.”
“I am!” “You’re not.”
“What’s up?” “You know.”
“I don’t.” “You do.”
“Tell me.” “Not now!”
“When then?” “Later!”
“Why’s that?” “You know!”
“I don’t!” “You do!”
“I’m off!” “Goodbye!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/6/2017 12:16:00 AM
Theses are very cute, I should try this form :) Thank you for reading & liking my The Girl And The MazeKeeper. I've written a few others like that. another one is called Angel' Hope :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 7/6/2017 2:03:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. They are good fun to do. // Barry
Date: 4/22/2017 4:35:00 PM
Lol, typical man/woman argument Barry! Very funny footle!~Che :)
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/24/2017 3:13:00 AM
Thank you, Cheryl, pleased you enjoyed it. // Barry
Date: 4/12/2017 1:53:00 AM
Dont you just love a conversation like this, when you are left feeling crazy???
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/14/2017 7:24:00 AM
I know from experience, Maria, it's infuriating. Thanks for the comment. // Barry
Date: 4/11/2017 9:41:00 PM
Yep! that's how it goes sometimes. You've captured that angry part of relationships well in this footle. It was quite funny as well. Good write! love and peace.
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Barry Stebbings
Date: 4/13/2017 3:06:00 AM
Thank you very, PoetPrentice. // Barry

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