The Architecture of Grief

The earth shakes, mimicking my weary bones,
And the ground is wet with tears left behind.
The cage of whiteness, locked tightly inside,
Upholds the heavy weight of every day's design.

Secrets and memories are ghosts we keep,
Bound tightly within the walls of the chest—
Forgiven, forgotten, or just cast aside,
The architecture of a heart aching for rest.

My steps falter on the unpaved ground,
Stumbling under the weight of a calcified spine.
Yet all this physical aching scarcely compares
To the quiet, structural cage of skeletal frame—

That has, until today,
Only answered to the marrow of your name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Santiago Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 12:36 PM
This poem is like a psalm! Beautiful and true!
Young Avatar
September 1, 2026 at 1:39 PM
Jairo, thank you so much! Hearing that my poem feels like a psalm is incredibly humbling. I am so glad that the piece resonated with you, and I truly appreciate your kind support here on PoetrySoup.
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