The Archer

Your arcing body Drawn, quivering like a bow I am, the archer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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December 20, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Wow, what a great haiku. I love the simile here. I wonder what the metaphor for the arrow is. Love is the arrow maybe? It is all too deep for me. Very profound.
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December 20, 2012 at 10:08 PM
Hello Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on this write. Rollo
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November 11, 2012 at 6:10 PM
I'm hoping your job is love... Mr Archer... xox~pd
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November 11, 2012 at 6:40 PM
HI PD, thank you for coming by, i always love your comments. Rollo
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