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The Archer

Your arcing body Drawn, quivering like a bow I am, the archer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/20/2012 9:50:00 PM
Wow, what a great haiku. I love the simile here. I wonder what the metaphor for the arrow is. Love is the arrow maybe? It is all too deep for me. Very profound.
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Rollo West
Date: 12/20/2012 10:08:00 PM
Hello Jon, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting on this write. Rollo
Date: 11/11/2012 6:10:00 PM
I'm hoping your job is love... Mr Archer... xox~pd
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Rollo West
Date: 11/11/2012 6:40:00 PM
HI PD, thank you for coming by, i always love your comments. Rollo

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