The Archangel and My Suffering

Once an Archangel, witnessing my suffering,

Descended close to me himself* to find 
 
And

With great compassion inquired what was the 

Cause of my pain

“ I can’t understand why so much, I have to suffer.” 

Hesitantly, I replied 

“Well,” he said compassionately,
 
“This is the only way for you, wisdom to gain!”




© Demetrios Trifiatis
 17 FEBRUARY 2015


*Note: Just for poetic purposes, I used “He, himself.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/20/2015 7:57:00 AM
If no pain then no gain. Seems we humans are stubborn down to the core. Pain gets our attention and leaves a last memory. A memory that says, "don't do that again!" As blinded beasts we fumble thru the world using trial and error. Great poem my friend. Your poems always are!
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Date: 2/17/2015 9:16:00 PM
Thanks for sharing your wisdom. An emotional message. Tfs
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:38:00 AM
Thank you, Ravi, my friend. The gifts of the spirit are to be shared!
Date: 2/17/2015 8:07:00 PM
Sage advice from a master poet Demetrios! Thank you! 7
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:40:00 AM
You certainly spoil me, dear Connie, however how could I take credit when inspiration is involved? Thank you for your kind visit!
Date: 2/17/2015 4:56:00 PM
This flows with rhythm and carries an emotional message. Emile.
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:42:00 AM
Thank you, dear Emile! This is really a fine appraisal of the work tried to be achieved!
Date: 2/17/2015 4:51:00 PM
More wonderful words of wisdom! If life was always perfect, we would never seek the Lord and never gain wisdom...so true...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/18/2015 1:46:00 AM
Very true, dear Rhonda! Striving for perfection is the goal of Man. This is what gives him dynamism and a purpose in life! Thank you so much for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 2/17/2015 8:44:00 AM
With the acquisition of wisdom, pain and suffering diminish for we come to realize it's temporary temporary nature. In some cases we are able to simply avoid it through wise planning. Sadly the fool will continue to suffer the same afflictions over and over again an in his heart think "Why me?"
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend, Richard, for your visit!
Date: 2/17/2015 8:31:00 AM
Words of wisdom said, dear friend Demetrios. I Love my guardian angel. We learn by trial and error, but it is heart breaking when our 1st step is the wrong one. Blessings dear friend eve
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Date: 2/17/2015 11:42:00 AM
Eve, my friend, thank you for your visit and kind comment! God bless you!
Date: 2/17/2015 3:52:00 AM
- Good morning my friend Demetrios, thanks for sharing your wisdom - You always have a choice, even when it looks like you do not have it - A pleasure to read your words - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 4:52:00 AM
Good morning to you too, my dear fiend, Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for your dear visit and gracious comment!
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