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The Aquarium

each one a diamond in a jeweler's box a planet unto itself the seahorse planet the clown fish kingdom the eels hideaway the deep features a godiva box of chocolates it was hilarious the way they go on invisible highways a community of barbers doctors, hairdressers, cops and children at play

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/23/2008 6:12:00 AM
This is very imaginative and flows with great clarity making for quite an enjoyable read. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 7/4/2008 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on having this beautiful and very visual poem featured, Absolutely lovely. Regards Heidie
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Date: 6/10/2008 4:21:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to smile with this one. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2008 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations Rhea on "Aquqrium" being featured. A different world. Hope all is well. God Bless. Vince
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