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The Approaching Thunder Storm

What is it about the sight of the female form
That turns us to hot jelly from a tepid lukewarm
We fumble and fuss
Our complexion gets flushed
As we anticipate the approaching thunder storm


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Judy Konos

December 25, 2015 at 7:11 PM

Jack you know perfectly well what it is about the sight of a female form where you start boiling like you're cooking hard eggs. You been boiling for years....now spill the facts...we are waiting...... and don't exaggerate...this is important.....

Jack Ellison

December 26, 2015 at 7:40 AM

YUP! No matter how old and decrepit I get, the sight of a young filly scantily dressed can still start my lower region a-motoring!!! And that's not an exaggeration Miss Judy! There, I've bared my soul!!! LOL Love the female form!!! YEE HAW! Love and hugs and smackers, Jacko xoxox

Michael Tor

December 24, 2015 at 4:48 PM

Jack Charmaine knows how to get Santa's heart to skip a beat. lol. Merriest Christmas to you and Mrs Claus. God bless you.

Jack Ellison

December 24, 2015 at 5:23 PM

Charmaine has been my sweetheart since I joined! What a lovely soul! A very Merry Christmas to you and yours my good friend, Michael!!! Jack

Charmaine Chircop

December 24, 2015 at 2:32 PM

: ) lovely, ever so sweet. Dear Santa, a merry merry Christmas and a big hug : )

Jack Ellison

December 24, 2015 at 2:43 PM

Awwww! You just melted my heart, my sweet!!!!!!!!! What beautiful words from an oh so beautiful lady! Merry Christmas to you and yours, sweetie! Love and huge hugs, dear Charmaine!!!! xoxox

Tim Smith

December 24, 2015 at 1:28 PM

Just the sight of her makes me smile....as I take in her essence for a while...those lips, those eyes...warms me inside...how I dig her simple style

Jack Ellison

December 24, 2015 at 4:23 PM

You are a master of these romantic lims!!! Merry Christmas Tim!!!

Carol Eastman

December 24, 2015 at 11:18 AM

Dear LimmerJack... or should I say GraphicJack... or SantaJack?... What ever we call you.. You are the prolific Thunder storm... And naturally I mean that in a good way!

Jack Ellison

December 24, 2015 at 4:27 PM

A man of many coats!!! LOL Love, Jackson xoxox

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