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The Approaching Thunder Storm

What is it about the sight of the female form That turns us to hot jelly from a tepid lukewarm We fumble and fuss Our complexion gets flushed As we anticipate the approaching thunder storm © Jack Ellison 2015

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Judy Konos

Date: 12/25/2015 7:11:00 PM

Jack you know perfectly well what it is about the sight of a female form where you start boiling like you're cooking hard eggs. You been boiling for years....now spill the facts...we are waiting...... and don't exaggerate...this is important.....

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/26/2015 7:40:00 AM

YUP! No matter how old and decrepit I get, the sight of a young filly scantily dressed can still start my lower region a-motoring!!! And that's not an exaggeration Miss Judy! There, I've bared my soul!!! LOL Love the female form!!! YEE HAW! Love and hugs and smackers, Jacko xoxox

Michael Tor

Date: 12/24/2015 4:48:00 PM

Jack Charmaine knows how to get Santa's heart to skip a beat. lol. Merriest Christmas to you and Mrs Claus. God bless you.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 5:23:00 PM

Charmaine has been my sweetheart since I joined! What a lovely soul! A very Merry Christmas to you and yours my good friend, Michael!!! Jack

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/24/2015 2:32:00 PM

: ) lovely, ever so sweet. Dear Santa, a merry merry Christmas and a big hug : )

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 2:43:00 PM

Awwww! You just melted my heart, my sweet!!!!!!!!! What beautiful words from an oh so beautiful lady! Merry Christmas to you and yours, sweetie! Love and huge hugs, dear Charmaine!!!! xoxox

Tim Smith

Date: 12/24/2015 1:28:00 PM

Just the sight of her makes me smile....as I take in her essence for a while...those lips, those eyes...warms me inside...how I dig her simple style

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 4:23:00 PM

You are a master of these romantic lims!!! Merry Christmas Tim!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 12/24/2015 11:18:00 AM

Dear LimmerJack... or should I say GraphicJack... or SantaJack?... What ever we call you.. You are the prolific Thunder storm... And naturally I mean that in a good way!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/24/2015 4:27:00 PM

A man of many coats!!! LOL Love, Jackson xoxox