The Apprentice

Bright orange flames arc from his outstretched fingers to his gnarled oak staff
crazy shadows dancing on the walls of the warded sanctum.
With a lifting of one eyebrow the apprentice flings the molten fire out and engulfs the
Lightning Balls with ease.  The lad strikes the butt of his staff on the stone ground and
with a clap of thunder, all magic winks out, both the flames and the lightning.

The Arcane Master rolls his eyes upward.  “Eh, show off.  You passed.  But you will find
life the real test, young Magister.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Nice narrative on the apprentice, Julie
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May 31, 2011 at 3:32 PM
Hi Julie-This is a very decriptive piece and you gave it life so that I could see it in my mind's eye like a scene from a fantasy being played out before me.I also liked your philosophical touch at the end that rounded it off nicely.I found it original and a pleasure to read.Thank you. Love Sylvia-known as June.
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May 31, 2011 at 4:46 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Julie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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May 30, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative poetry ...enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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