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The Apple Tree

Apples on the tree Binds my mind to stretch a scene Clash of birds Dining on the shoot with some Engaging themselves to enjoy it to.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/12/2017 2:10:00 PM

I was delighted to see your work in my winners’ list..I enjoyed reading the work of an outstanding poet..Your participation was much appreciated..Sara

Afnan Jalil
Date: 10/12/2017 8:52:00 PM

Thank you for all your support. It is the kindness of my worthy God who enabled me to think, write and present this but on my own, surely I wasn't expecting this.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/10/2017 10:55:00 PM

Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Lilus - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)