The Apple Don'T Fall Far From the Tree

<                                          amidst .... apple tree
                                        black bear .... pounces limb
                                              cubs wait .... below









Entry For
Andrea Dietrich's
Fall Animal Haiku Contest
G.L. All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 12, 2015 at 12:18 PM
KATHERINE, LOVE THIS...SKAT
Thajudeen Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 9:02 AM
A nature's shot.Nice
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with this great write..Sara
Roberts Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:12 PM
nice one, congrats on your HM in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in Andrea's Animal Haiku contest with this lovely cute poetry >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 1:54 PM
Congrats Katherine on your HM in Andrea's contest with this very cute entry and a very visual photo in the mind of the reader..luv.. enjoy a special honor today ..happy weekend with luv..
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October 8, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Ah, so the cubs are waiting for the apples to fall. Cute image, Katherine! Congrats on your HM in Andrea's contest. Love, Carolyn
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October 8, 2010 at 9:39 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Very familar fall sight Katherine, congratulations on your worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Katherine
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October 8, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Hi, Katherine, now that I can view my winners, I am going thru to see who wrote what. This was cute. You were NOT on the bottom, sweetie. THe HMs just fall according to the time you entered the contestl. So I hope you don't feel bad. Luv, Andrea
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October 5, 2010 at 1:34 PM
Interesting presentation. Nice use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
Neels Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Ahh, Katherine what a cute entry for Andrea's contest. Good luck to you ;) Wilma
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October 2, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Very good Haiku, so enjoyed...always Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:10 AM
Nice visual Katherine.. good luck in Andrea's neat contest ... those little bear cubs are so cute and cuddly but Mama bear isn't luv.. nice one..
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 5:24 AM
Very nice theme for the contest, Katherine. Good luck
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