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The Angry Water

water flares up disaster looms now a city sinks

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/13/2012 3:21:00 AM

Powerful stuff, Modupe...I live in hurricane country so I can surely identify with this...congratulations - Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/10/2012 6:23:00 PM

Modupe, :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed stopping by to read all the hurricane haiku... every winner on this list had a mind blowing image... take care~ Always* PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 7:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Hurricane Haiku contest Modupe. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 1:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Hurricanes contest, well done!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/9/2012 1:27:00 AM

Congratulations on you well deserved win Modupe xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2012 12:04:00 AM

that's one monster of a hurricane, MOdupe. Glad to see this one on the winners list. Congrats to you.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/9/2012 12:01:00 AM

CONGRATS ON A WONDERFUL WRITE AND WIN ON HURRICANE LUV..

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 11/8/2012 8:01:00 PM

thank you' san

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2012 2:00:00 PM

oh, this must be for the hurricane contest? An apt description of what happens, Modupe. waiting for your David poem!!

Richard Palmer

Date: 11/1/2012 8:41:00 AM

great write Modupe,would have been better if you started with the second line,just my thought lol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/23/2012 7:18:00 AM

Personifying water as angry is a great idea for a haiku...I think of so many lives lost from angry waters all over the world...the Japan tsunami...the tsunami that hit India yrs back...can u think of an happy water?? Only think I can think of is a rainbow...an April shower...ps...doing wonderful...became a granny last wk and so I have been taking care of my daughter and her newborn...and u?....

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2012 1:46:00 PM

this is so good, Modupe...enjoyed....