The Angry Seashore

The Angry Seashore

The Angry Seashore
Sneering at oil rigs.
Cusses and waves frantically -
Fearing tomorrow.


Written for the "OIL SPILLED OUT ANGER!" contest
FORMAT: Free Verse the since slam is no longer an accepted form for use on Poetry Soup.  

SLAM POETRY is PERFORMANCE Poetry.  So imagine my performance.  I am leaning forward toward the audience with a frown on my face as I recite line one.  Then, as I step forward for line two, my facial expressionsl change from a frown to a very angry sneering look.  Next, I start waving my arms slowly as I state the word "Cusses".  Then, as I recite the rest of line three I wave my arms faster and pick up the speed of line delivery.   Lastly, imagine that I am cowering my posture down with my face still looking at the audience, My body is turned sideways and I am pretending to bite my fingernails  I have sad eyes and a fearful frown on my face.  OK  THAT'S THE PERFORMANCE...USE YOUR IMAGINATION.  Smiles!

© July 19, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 5:09 PM
Performance came through loud and clear! I feel the same about the lack of safety for the future. Congratulations on your win! Aloha, Connie
Brown Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in S K A T 's contest "Oil Spilled Out Anger ". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 8:19 AM
Congrats on your HM in Irma's contest with this wonderful write and win Dane Ann.. enjoy your special honor today..with luv..
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Dane Ann. Love, Carol
Galua Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:13 AM
mmmm....I love how you worded it,,,great write!
Arteaga Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:05 AM
hopefully BP has no more doctored photos and things are actually TRYING to be fixed, good poem
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