The Angry Ocean

Whitecaps grow larger at the shore
Swells on the open ocean
Toss merchant ships to and fro
 As the Sea exerts its dominance

The apathy of the ocean
Is evident
It's towering waves crash violently
Into the face of the shore
 Eroding its existence

 Frightening yet enchanting 
That is the paradox of the 
angry ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Evans Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:56 PM
"towering waves crash violently Into the face of the shore Eroding its existence." Vivid lines. The poem is rooted deeply in reality.
Mccall Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:36 PM
Hi Richard thank you for stopping by and thank you for your awesome comment. Yes this poem truly is rooted in reality. Have a blessed evening.
Smith Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 1:28 PM
We can only hope the ocean calms for awhile...wonderful Edward
Mccall Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:13 PM
I agree Tim and thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words have a blessed evening sir.
Shetley Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 11:00 AM
The ocean is so powerful. Lovely tribute to its moodiness.
Mccall Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 6:13 PM
Thank you ThviaI was inspired to write it while at the beach last week. Thank you so much for leaving such a sweet comment have a blessed evening
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