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The angels danced

The angels danced with joy when I was born. They wept tears of sorrow when I died. The rest of the time they took no notice of me. They did right: only shooting stars as well as supernovae are of interest
22.08.2019 Angels Danced Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Date: 8/24/2019 10:22:00 PM
So brilliantly conceived and so artistically delivered, Kurt. Your haibun and haiku dance a perfect pair. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/22/2019 7:19:00 PM
wow, the short way you delivered this was really well done!!! Wish I had thought of this idea. The Ku is awesome too!!
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 8/23/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea. I bet you had. Awaiting you in the contest)