Kurt Ravidas Poet Haibun

The Angels Danced

The angels danced with joy when I was born. They wept tears of sorrow when I died. The rest of the time they took no notice of me. They did right:

only shooting stars
as well as supernovae 
are of interest


22.08.2019
Angels Danced Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lu Loo

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Susan Ashley August 24, 2019 at 10:22 PM So brilliantly conceived and so artistically delivered, Kurt. Your haibun and haiku dance a perfect pair. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2019 at 7:19 PM wow, the short way you delivered this was really well done!!! Wish I had thought of this idea. The Ku is awesome too!! Kurt Ravidas August 23, 2019 at 8:02 AM Thank you, Andrea. I bet you had. Awaiting you in the contest)