The Angel and Fallen Star

Fallen Star searches the constellations./ So many destinations./ Rolling through time, 
passing generations./ After so long something catches his fascination./ A luminous light / so 
bright/ roaming a planet in the distance./ Without a second thought he ends his existence!

       A Fallen Star blazes across the midnight sky./ A woman walks by./ In disguise/ as an 
Angel from above./ The Fallen Star has literally found love./ He does cartwheels to impress/ 
this gorgeous princess./ What must he do to win the heart of this chic?  The Fallen Star is 
love 
sick?/

       He asks, "Come fly with me/ spread those wings and be spiritually free."/ She's unsure,/ 
and insecure/ of love that is melting into obsurity;/ ignoring it's purity,/ refusing to explore/ 
his hearts door,/ and it's ability/ to heal her pain,/ and give her security./ She has nothing to 
lose, but the world to gain;/ He means each word sincerely!/

       Time has no significance with them./ A raging passion begins between her and him./ A 
desire/ so intense;/ The flames of this fire/ is evident!/ The Fallen Star is hell-bent/ to 
worship this creature that is heaven-sent./ This bond is no coincident./ This angel is oh so 
confident!/ Seeing is believing,/ and these two beings/ can be seen on any radar./ A radiant 
light/ in the night;/ is the Angel and Fallen Star!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/1/2010 4:32:00 PM
Jimmy este angel disfrazado aprecia este hermoso poema much. Yo siempre abrigare esto, mi amor. Siempre, Audrey*
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Date: 2/1/2010 10:21:00 AM
So beautiful Jimmy are these words to the woman who captured your Heart,your angel ,your Princess..If this angel is insecure,Im sure your words would be a comfort,indeed..talented indeed,,Bravo my friend..Charma
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