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The Angel

You kissed me softly with dews of the night Your face shone smartly,a captivating sight. In sweet morn dried those crystalised tears And in vibrant night,you mute my living fears. So winged,so holy,so awe divine A gift from God lipped with heavenly signs . As the sweet morning blooms rosy red With dreams uncertain,away has fled. For in a happy blossom of smiling skies Is your white countenance of purity divine Robed with fire and comfort upon your breast That lays me down my troubled mind to rest. Your love is cast upon my fainting will Rushing streams so wild has broken still. Celestial are thou,weilding the will of God The most praised jewel of earthly form. THE ANGEL
(This poem is for the angel contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/7/2013 12:50:00 PM
EXCELLENT PIECE MY OLD FRIEND I TIP MY HAT AND SAY BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 8/31/2013 11:48:00 AM
Just beautiful! Very romantic piece of poetry! This reminded me of my poem titled, "Forbidden Love". Wish I could read and comment more on your work today, but I just don't have the time.....I will come back soon!
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Date: 8/19/2013 10:27:00 PM
very nicely done ;} ,,,, thank you for reading my Hollow Bones ;}
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Date: 7/18/2013 10:32:00 AM
Very awesome write friend Mustapha about angel.. I like it :) thanks for stopping by..Hugs, Maria
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:19:00 AM
Simple beautiful and inspiring. Congrats on your well deserved win with this one.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Sirak,i really appreciate that.
Date: 6/25/2013 7:07:00 AM
Congratulation on your superb win. Connie
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Connie,I appreciate that.
Date: 6/24/2013 11:24:00 PM
Congrats on this celestial piece...we all need angels to help us through.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for the congrats Eileen,very kind of you.
Date: 6/24/2013 3:45:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:11:00 AM
Thank you Deb for the congrats.Light and Love
Date: 6/24/2013 12:17:00 AM
Beautiful and brilliant quill! Congrats Mustapha. AO
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:09:00 AM
Thanks buddy for the congrats.Greetings to you.
Date: 6/23/2013 8:34:00 PM
dearest friend congrats an excellent win with this fav poem of mine exquisite write love Shadow xox smiles
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:07:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend...big hugs.xox
Date: 6/23/2013 2:04:00 PM
Mustapha, My thoughts are with you today as you celebrate!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:05:00 AM
Thank you George for your kind thoughts sir.Have a great day.
Date: 6/23/2013 1:49:00 PM
special cheers to you for making the grade!.. didn't enter this one, but your is serenely quilled, mus..:) huggs
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Nette for the cheers sweet lady.
Date: 6/23/2013 6:33:00 AM
Hi m congratulations ....love this piece, tranquil & beautiful:) your friend cheriebunny
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 9:59:00 AM
Thank you dear Cherrybunnypie....big hugs my friend xox
Date: 6/23/2013 4:21:00 AM
relaxing piece, beautifully made! congrats!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 9:57:00 AM
Thank you Elai for the congrats xox
Date: 6/22/2013 10:12:00 PM
Mustapha. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/30/2013 9:55:00 AM
Thank you dear Skat,stunned am I.I didn't expect to win.
Date: 6/20/2013 10:10:00 PM
I think this one should do splendidly in the angel contest. Good luck!
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 7:04:00 PM
Thank you dearheart,so kind of you to leave me a kind feedback.
Date: 6/20/2013 1:45:00 PM
stunning poem M.M gl in contest don't forget to put date at bottom Love Shadow x smiles
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thank you my dear for your kind comment.I'm going to put it now my friend.
Date: 6/20/2013 12:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem Mustapha!Enjoyed the read.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 6:58:00 PM
Thank you I meant,sorry for the error.
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 6:49:00 PM
Thank yo kash for your kind comment. :)
Date: 6/20/2013 7:22:00 AM
Great rhythm, flow and rhyme to this contest entry..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
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Mustapha Mohammed
Date: 6/22/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara for those kind words friend.

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