The Amazing Boat Ride

‘Twas a day that I will never forget,  
My family and I took a boat ride together and it was magnificent!
First we walked towards the boat, splishing and splashing along the shore
We climbed aboard the vessel, to sail upon the sea; adventures to explore.

The engine started and off we went, further and further away from land
Good music blaring, vessel mates staring, couples held each other’s hands.
The cool breeze swayed my long black locs, the sunshine kissed my face
My family members sat and enjoyed the ride, but I wanted to make the boat a more exciting place.

I got up from my seat when I heard one of my favourite songs
Flung myself unto a metal pole and held on strong
I began dancing excitedly and frantically, 
All the people on the boat stared and smiled at the sight of me.

My parents laughed, my siblings cheered, my children wanted to join in the fun
The captain shouted, “She is a good leader. Do whatever she does!”
I pranced and jigged and bubbled and twirled; I felt as light as the wind
Oh what a lovely time on the boat, for this moment I have lived.

We reached far out in the sea so wide, it was finally time to snorkel
The boat was anchored, swimmers disembarked, but my stomach started to twinkle
I wanted to see the lovely coral reef, but fear gripped me and said, “Not a chance!”
With all the adventures that came with the boat ride all I could do was just dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/22/2020 8:01:00 AM
Love boat trips Reniece, yours sounds a blast, glad you had a good time. Tom
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 9/22/2020 8:51:00 AM
Awe Tom:) That boat ride was the most fun to date. I'm happy you enjoyed my poem. Blessings.
Date: 9/17/2020 7:22:00 PM
Such a lovely read, and funny twist for the ending. Great write throughout. Thank you for the boat ride. Blessings!
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 9/17/2020 7:34:00 PM
Hello Joe. Ha ha. It was an excellent boat ride! I had fun. I am happy you enjoyed reading my poem. Blessings to you as well.
Date: 9/14/2020 1:55:00 PM
Ren, I really enjoyed the joie de vivre of your boat ride. It made my spirit dance to read it! So glad you posted this, and I look forward to reading more, my friend. God bless your day ~ John
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 9/17/2020 7:32:00 PM
Hello John. I am happy you enjoyed my poem. I had a blast! I think I'll become a premium member soon, in order to be able to post pics as well. Blessings to you.
Date: 9/1/2020 4:06:00 AM
A intimate piece that beckons to the spirit. I enjoyed this so much. God bless you with many many more. Love and prayers, Gina
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 9/2/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you Gina! I appreciate your kind thoughts. May God continue to bless you bountifully as well.Love and prayers always.
Date: 8/29/2020 3:35:00 PM
Well, all was not lost, Reneice. You danced! Thanks for sharing your memorable day.
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Reneice Mowatt
Date: 8/29/2020 9:36:00 PM
Haha...I am happy you enjoyed my recount Jenna. Cheers!
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