The Alternate Story

With every word, with every phrase,
You breathe, you come alive,
A tale of truth, mapped with reality,
Or a dream unlived for which you thrive,
You live through what is written,
Or you choose to hold your pens,
It doesn’t matter how it ends,
Because it’s the end where it all begins,

Broken hour glasses of the War,
Acting as the mirror to see through the past,
The good is victorious, and is glorified,
And evil is evil, because in the battle they did not last,
With their blood, is inked the war diary,
So winner takes it all, and is called as ‘good’, hence,
As it doesn’t matter how the war ends,
Because it’s the end where it all begins

And then there is Romeo, falling in love
And Juliet waiting for him in the Balcony,
They kill Romeo, and justify the murder,
But love is charged for an unforgivable felony,
Died, the felons leave the stage,
But love lives irrespective of the skins
As it doesn’t matter how the life ends,
Because it’s the end where it all begins

You pose the king of you story,
Or in their game, you are just a pawn,
Your story is written in this moment,
Larger than life; this moment is never gone,
So when they bury you as a ‘Sinner’,
Be the phoenix to rise from your sins,
As it doesn’t matter how the Story ends,
Because it’s the end where it all begins

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/10/2012 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest of Joyce "My Favorite" Deepak. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/8/2012 10:06:00 PM
Nice poem. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot Lee...
Date: 9/8/2012 7:55:00 PM
Deepak, congrats on your win with this excellent poem! Love, Kim
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Kim. I'm glad that you liked it.:)
Date: 9/8/2012 11:49:00 AM
A great poem deepak,Congrats on your win!
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot. :)
Date: 9/8/2012 4:00:00 AM
Congratulations Deepak I enjoyed reading this xx
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:45:00 AM
Thank you!!
Date: 9/7/2012 8:14:00 PM
Deepak, congratulations, in Joyce's favorite contest... good night~ PD
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 9/7/2012 3:39:00 PM
This one I knew would rate high when I first read it and I am glad to find your name here and to get introduced to your poetry with this great poem. Believe me it had some great competition. Congratulations. Joyce
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Deepak Ahuja
Date: 9/9/2012 9:44:00 AM
Thanks a lot Joyce. Im Honored. :)
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