The Altar of Your Love

I see your face,
a keen imprint in the fog of my longing.
The world dissolved into dissonance,
hard edges sharpened by the heat of you.

I reach for you,
not with hands,
but with the kind of inferno
that licks at the walls of the soul.

Love me—just enough
to stop the senselessness—
to make real of the rush
I drown in every time you 
look my way.

Shelter me like the flame I’ve become,
smoldering, slipping—
searching for absolution
in the quiet violence of your arms.

Give me something.
Not the world.
Not the stars.
Only proof that I am more 
than a dream at the altar 
of your love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Bordner Avatar
March 16, 2025 at 10:43 AM
Breathtaking sensuality and supplication at this alter of ageless desire Laura. Such beautiful balance and originality in this special heart poem. I love the visual of the "slipping flame", and "quiet violence" is very strong. "To make real of the rush..." masterful use of language, and feeling here! This poem is a super FAV!!! "The kind of inferno that licks at the walls of the soul..." You've become a love righteous flame...Justin
Breidenthal Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:25 AM
You are quite a formidable, love inducing flame yourself Justin… your words mean the absolute world to me. Appreciate your warmth immensely !!<3 Laura
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