The Alluring River

The river looks calm and inviting,
a natural gift of beauty.
Waterfowl inhabit to feed and nest.
A gateway shared by creatures,
dangers hidden beneath.
The river is beautifully calm and serene,
its powerful dangers are often unseen.
Currents can swirl hidden from shore,
tragically become be a drowning door.
A natural resource to respect and admire,
a gift of nature that will never expire.
Unique with brackish water properties too,
with legends of sea creatures venturing through.
a white egret soars
diving into spawning fish ~
a river regale
9/5/2020 (edited 9/6/20) Writing Challenge - Nature, Four in One Sponsor: Constance LaFrance
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Crabtree Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 6:39 PM
A river is rather moody. A lot of times it takes other elements to stir it up. I love nature. Thanks for writing this! It has excellent flow. ~Peace, Angie
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 4:49 PM
Thank you Angie!
La France Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Tania, c congratulations on your win in my Nature Four in One Challenge with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
Kitchin Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 1:42 PM
Thank you Constance and thank you for the Fav!
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 2:57 PM
I love rivers and oceans and especially your wonderful imagery:-) many congrats on your win Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Kitchin Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Thank you Jan! hugs
Andresen Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 7:11 AM
- I hear the river singing ... beautifully- Congratulations on your win, Tania :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kitchin Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 1:45 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise! hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Fantastic write, Tania! Congratulations! Fave, as I want to read this one again!
Kitchin Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Kim!
Dietrich Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 5:39 PM
I love how you did it all about the element water with animals of water. Very well done.
Kitchin Avatar
September 8, 2020 at 6:25 PM
Thank you Andrea, I have always loved rivers but know they can be just as dangerous and they are beautiful!
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