The All Shore State

A youth had come from La-na-i

He like to surf on Ka-ua-i

He slept on the plane,

Had no one to blame

Surfed on the isle of Ha-wai-i
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Leffanta Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 7:15 PM
A John John Florence talk story? Aloha! Rico
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 8:29 PM
If it was so, tho' like where most of the surf meet events are held, he is an Oahu boy--didn't meet the rhyming scheme...Aloha, Will.
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