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The All Shore State

A youth had come from La-na-i He like to surf on Ka-ua-i He slept on the plane, Had no one to blame Surfed on the isle of Ha-wai-i

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/30/2019 7:15:00 PM
A John John Florence talk story? Aloha! Rico
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:29:00 PM
If it was so, tho' like where most of the surf meet events are held, he is an Oahu boy--didn't meet the rhyming scheme...Aloha, Will.

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