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The Alchemy of Truth Includes the Lens

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Something sitting unpublished in draft. Finally seeing the light of day. 

 

 

The alchemy of truth may be from a particular perspective or colored by youth and sprinkled with objective For your truth can hold your own view your lens through which you see the world And naivety can lead astray and reality fall subject to that doom And you may not have the ability yet to completely read the room When you don't have wisdom You have less fear and conclusions are reached quickly But life is so much more complex and taken in context its sticky Was that what was really meant or did it happen by chance Was it deliberate inference or laid out by happenstance Most times most things are not architected they happen in real time whim And though the outcome can be devastating the creation is less of a sin What leads to what and how can that happen isn't always clear to see the cause and effect And so truth be known, good intentions implode and things go off track on their own So don't hang the actors with the act they alone did not write the script, it's a fact Life is all improv with a heavy dose of chaos And giving to much credence to the feelings caused can ruin what may be right there A living pachinko machine that happened to play out that way, this time, here The alchemy of truth includes the lens - Artimus 9/24/23 (C) Susan Manley

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Date: 2/18/2024 11:10:00 AM
I love how your poem beautifully delves into the intricate nature of truth and the complexities of human perception. It artfully explores how truth can be shaped by personal perspectives, coloured by youth, and influenced by subjective interpretation. The imagery of alchemy and the interplay between truth, naivety, and reality add depth to the poem's reflection on the human condition... It acknowledges the limitations of individual understanding and the inherent difficulty in discerning truth amidst life's chaos. The idea that truth may be elusive, subject to interpretation, and influenced by circumstances resonates deeply with the reader.
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Date: 2/18/2024 11:14:00 AM
Thank you! I was looking back through memories and realizing how my "truth" was colored by perspective. I had wanted this to be another rhyming masterpiece, but it came out how it came out. I value your thoughts, Susan
Date: 2/17/2024 5:17:00 PM
just wanted you to know that I stopped by to read your poem and then had to stop before I could comment. I'm anxious to read it and will return tomorrow to do so. Sara
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