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She walked with killing steps, heart splitting steps Her strong frankincense seduced thy nose smoothly And filled my heart with life Her face was sun and shone with light Her polite, honest, calm and good looking face Was all that was needed to boil my intestines Her soft, smooth and comfortable hands trembled my nerves Then a golden tear fell from one of her stars And through it I could see our future lives together. Written between 2000-2003 Just the young thoughts of the young mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/24/2015 8:35:00 AM
a lovely pen njeri, i like your poems... nad
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/25/2015 3:34:00 PM
Thank you Nad, i really appreciate your comment
Date: 2/24/2015 12:31:00 AM
Wow, I have read your poems and they are great. Looking forward to more of your posts
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Njeri Hunjeri
Date: 2/24/2015 5:33:00 AM
Asanti Njoki. I appreciate your nice comment. Be blessed my sister

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