The Air

I see our hearts every where
Theyre on the tv and in windows
But for this i do not care
Towards you is where the wind blows

Missing you is the hardest part
Even though you will be back
I think that this time apart
Has made up for the things we lack

Maybe its loyalty that i speak of
This is a possibility
But i think in the end its love 
This is a vulnerability

Not being able to see your face 
Not being able to kiss your lips
Its like you dissapeared without a trace
Gone for a while like a solar eclipse

But youll be back soon
This is hopefully true
As i stare at the moon
And think of you

It wont be long 
Until we're together again
My feelings are strong
Its with you i wish to have been

I cant wait to see your face shine
With the simple hello we share
The moment will be all mine
For when i breathe youre the air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/25/2009 8:03:00 PM
I feel the lonliness in this write and the longing. Nice write.
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Date: 12/25/2009 4:46:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/25/2009 4:41:00 PM
longing, is nice,, keep up the expression..
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