The Age of Perfection

He did not mean to be cocky 
He did not mean to know everything
He was an Adonis, he was Zeus, he was Mighty Mouse, 
He was twenty

She did not mean to be self-assured
She did not mean to be the utmost
She did not mean to be Wonder Woman or a Goddess
But she could not help herself, she was twenty

The perfect age to show your stuff
To know your stuff
To blow your stuff
The age of perfectness, twenty.
I look back and smile at it.
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Wolf Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Adonis, Zeus...Mighty Mouse. I think he was more like Mighty Mouse. lol. But you're so right about that age. They are Immortal gods, or so they think. Just check back with them at 65, eh?! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 10:47 PM
I just have to say they are so THERE - perfect in every way!
Walker Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 4:39 AM
I truly Love this poem Caren. You capture the essence of youth without condemning it. And, like you, I miss those days when I knew everything. Thank you for this poem.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for this lovely comment
Mcintosh Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:19 AM
So true. I love this so... God B L E S S you with many more revelations
Krutsinger Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Thank you Regina; I remember this as the perfect age.
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