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The Aftermath of a Goodtime

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I dink until I’m drunk I drink until I’m drumpt out I dreamt that I was punked But shonly da lonely Shunderstands my schlump Sheepin snuggly next to a dumpster Dreamin it must be your rump But when I awoke To my shutter-bug-eyed surprise It was some awfully smelly bloke Homeless guy!

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Date: 1/24/2025 1:54:00 AM
Homeless persons would prefer a dumpster for rest. I like the tone of your poem.
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Benjamin Bartley
Date: 1/24/2025 9:29:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by. Yeah, I'm afraid this poem was inspired from experience.

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