The After Thought Pt 2

She said you’re such an incredible person, and I thought to myself but not for you?

She said you’re everything I wanted and I thought, well except the one thing we needed

Visualizing the man, you deserve and desiring I could be that man

I wish I could explore your mind and pick out all your insecurities

She doesn’t want her heart to break because it already has too many cracks

She has heard it all before so she doubts when she hears the truth

Thoughts tossing and turning in her mind, all she can think about is the thought after the next

Thinking love is forever but she questions how long forever is

Asking will you love me tomorrow

So I respond I will love you to Pluto and back while telling you how beautiful you are each day because I know you deserve that and more

She is a queen but often forgets about the crown on her head

Second guessing my intentions because of the intentions of another man

So I am patient because love is patient until the end

She cries saying I don’t deserve you and tells me you’d be perfect for another girl

I guess the definition of perfect has changed because I keep falling short, wondering who will pick me up again

Who will be the girl to actually mean what she says when she recites “I’d never hurt you.”

When will it cease, I keep hearing thank you for being the best as I watch her walk away

Pushed behind another guy and to the side of your brain because everything came across as too good to be true

A gentleman is what she wanted but had never met so when he came along he was rejected because he was perceived as a scam

And when he left she realized her mistake 

But by then it was too late and this was her after thought

p.s. good guy losing because the bad guy cheated…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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