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The Affair of Delilah's Barber

THE AFFAIR OF DELILAH’S BARBER Delilah’s decadence was hard to bare. Barbarous Philistines, they’d cut his hair. His new growth wrought with chillers. They had chained him to pillars. Samson fell house in an awful affair. 6/30/2017 Broken Poetry Contest Broken heart, Broken relationship,Broken enemies

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Date: 7/8/2017 4:18:00 PM
Great work, Kim. A huge story broken down in delicate pieces with a touch of brilliance. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thanks, Curtis!
Date: 7/1/2017 7:00:00 AM
Hmmm, that is a different take on the story, Kim:) well written:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/1/2017 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 6/30/2017 5:30:00 PM
If she'd bothered reading her Old Testament she would've know cutting off his hair was the wrong thing to do. Bad planning!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2017 7:44:00 PM
LOL!
Date: 6/30/2017 4:54:00 PM
This was really cool Kim. Your mind sure does work overtime and do such a fantastic job when it does. Very creative. Best wishes in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thanks, Chris!
Date: 6/30/2017 4:18:00 PM
what a very clever interpretation of the bible story for the broken contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/30/2017 4:19:00 PM
Thanks, Jan :) Had fun writing this one!

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