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The Admiring

Admiring from a distance Too shy to be noticed Watching way his hair covers his eyes listening to his voice Thinking if only he was mine The way our eyes met His smile leaves me in some type of daze Heart beating faster Leaving me breathless speechless Mind racing Lips trembling Heart pounding Crushing on him One opportunity to truly be his...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/1/2010 8:23:00 AM
CUTE WRITE, HOW YOU JUST SIT AND WATCH HIM,,, MAYBE FALLING IN LOVE BY WATCHING HIM AND SEEING HIS COURTIESNESS... WAITING FOR THAT OPPERTUNITY.. LOVED THIS SWEET WRITE
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