The Admiring

Admiring from a distance 
Too shy to be noticed
Watching way his hair covers his 
eyes
listening to his voice 
Thinking if only he was mine 
The way our eyes met
 His smile leaves me in some type of 
daze
 Heart beating faster
Leaving me breathless
 speechless
Mind racing
Lips trembling
Heart  pounding 
Crushing on him
One opportunity to truly be his...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 1, 2010 at 8:23 AM
CUTE WRITE, HOW YOU JUST SIT AND WATCH HIM,,, MAYBE FALLING IN LOVE BY WATCHING HIM AND SEEING HIS COURTIESNESS... WAITING FOR THAT OPPERTUNITY.. LOVED THIS SWEET WRITE
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