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The Actual Dependant

Waking up in the morning with you near me, Making your favourite toast and your black tea, Hugging me I hear your words "Good morning my love", With a sweet kiss , I say "I want more now". Holding your hands and helping you walk, I love to hear, your cute and lovely talks. Combing you long snowy hair, Washing your face ,making you more fair. Feeding you food with my own hands, Taking you for a walk into dreamland, I completed you in everyway, Why then did you leave me and go away? What should I do alone in the old age? In front of your photo , stand and gaze? You felt you freed me of your burden.. No Darling, not you, it was me,on you who was dependant.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2010 4:53:00 PM
Awesome piece, Rima! I love the last two lines! So touching! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 5/28/2009 1:13:00 AM
Lovely use of imagery Rima! Please keep on posting sire! Jeremia
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