The Act of Love

A great stage where they both stood on 
Each have a script to read
Read it in great act of love & passion 
The passion of two lovers when they first meet
The princess she was & he was the knight
That's how he wanted the tale to start
With a rose he asked her a dance under the moon light
& promised her that even death wont do them apart
he gave her all she ever dreamt of
enough of care.. secure.. strength & pride
too much of no ending love
with promises to never leave her side
she told him all about her fears
& all what she crave to
he swore he'll never be a reason for her tears
& he'll make all her dreams come true
he prayed they would grow old together
& she prayed he would be the one she would die between his arms
he prayed they could share every moment till forever
& she prayed they couldn't break those charms
he prayed she's the one he share his home
& she promised to keep it always comfortable& warm
like every fairy tale normally end
"happily ever after" were the words left to say
but it seems he forgot that part of the script
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 9/24/2009 4:23:00 AM
Truth in the message all to much truth. good concept. Strong title your work is always interesting and your stories true keep writting
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Date: 9/21/2009 10:45:00 AM
I Like It, But.....Theres Seems To Be Somethign Missing, Or A Little In Lack Of Form? Work On This, Make It Flow More Smoothly. ~Rain
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Date: 8/15/2009 6:58:00 AM
Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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