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The Abominable Snowman

THE ABOMINABLE SNOWMAN

it started out white
but the late snow was weeks old.
results were a fright –
those red pepper lips, corn teeth,
tomato ketchup eyes,

the tire-track forehead,
the oil and grit in his cheeks –
my roadside snowman.
and those dried apricot ears
been in the pantry for years

abominable! –
chest a tattered cardboard box, 
gloves were threadbare sox
on discarded broomstick arms –
my roadside snowman

save demise for last –
the tall, wide-brimmed plastic hat
was what did him in.
when the morning sun came out 
just everything went flat

what a sorry sight
that vegetable salad
in a muddy drool,
with young springtime’s merry sun
the ruin of late winter’s fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/15/2014 12:46:00 AM
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Date: 2/24/2014 8:34:00 AM
Daver - This is just wild. Into my favorites in no time flat. love, Kathy
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Date: 2/21/2014 7:31:00 PM
Hi, there, Daver, I hope your eyes are doing better. Have a great weekend. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/19/2014 2:00:00 PM
Well Daver good to read how your abominable...Well sort of collapsed into his abdominals..' I hope you thought that funny ? take care Joe..)
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Date: 2/18/2014 9:45:00 PM
Oh, I LOVE this, Daver. GREAT imagination in this unique poem!!
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Date: 2/18/2014 11:59:00 AM
Makes me feel giddy, Daver: You have the wildest and most clever imagination.:)) I think I'll send this to my friend. Ellen, would love this! Keep well, love, Mikki
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Date: 2/17/2014 2:46:00 PM
Haha...I can just picture this sorry sad snowman....awesome job....
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