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The Abandoned Church

How long have you been alone People used to gather around you Helping each other Praying to their God But their God walked away The doors were locked And the windows were nailed shut All of the people left Finding other places to worship You were left all alone To sit in a field and watch the world pass by At least until you become just debris And then everything will be all over © Poem – IV/II/MMXXV LRET

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Date: 2/4/2025 11:36:00 AM
Nice poem. The people abandoned God so there is no need for a building any more. Sad
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Date: 2/4/2025 7:50:00 AM
Soon all of Babylon the Great will be abandoned, then gone forever. Thank God!
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