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The day I met you

I still remember that beautiful day like yesterday not a bit Have I forgotten The weather on that day was misty And you were jogging You were looking really pretty Upon seeing me staring at your beauty your face turn crimson Iike the seven beautiful colours of a prism When I met you, I was afraid to talk to you When I started talking I was afraid to ask for a date When I started dating you, I was afraid to confess my love But that day also came When I confess my love toward you We were walking along the shore The night was high, with a harvest moon my heart was pounding and hands started to shake As I propose you and showed you the ring There I notice that no sunset, No spring Have such a beautiful grace The grace I see in your face Your smile has the power to replace A severous tempest into sunlight Darkness into a day which is bright The sun waits for your smile to set The stars wait for your smile, in order to shine since the time I have met you Joy follows me like a shadow that never leaves I will be lost in your thoughts And will bear pain for you God has sent you as mine Will tell the whole world this beautiful line That My heart desires to adorn your dreams And to sway in your heart O you are the one who's s spell has cast upon me the best gift is health, contentment the greatest Wealth, but my life is running through your breath ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 13 April 2018 For the contest " 10 words " by " Joseph May " 36 lines Crimson: Line 7, forgotten: line 2, grace: line 19, Harvest: line 15 Love: Line 11, Misty: Line 3, Shadow: Line 27, Shore: Line 14 Tempest: Line 22, Yesterday: Line 1

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Date: 6/10/2018 11:16:00 AM
Beautifully romantic!
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:54:00 AM
Sensual, expressive and romantic. What a great poem Faraz and I love the last line so much I wish I had written it. Kudos.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:59:00 PM
Faraz, your love poem is utterly breathtaking in its purity of romantic devotion. Every line is so beautifully and lovingly poetic, especially your last stanza and final couplet, which just swept me off my feet and carried me away in the outpouring of your lovely emotions.. Superb, my friend. Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 4/28/2018 8:30:00 AM
YOUR EXPRESSIONS OF A MAN'S DOUBTS, AND HESITATIONS ARE BEAUTIFUL. With evidence of the great joy found when man overcomes such thoughts. Exceptional creation and a fav...
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Date: 4/24/2018 7:43:00 AM
Oh my! A lovely romantic poem. Beautifully done. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/23/2018 2:28:00 PM
Very nicely penned Faraz.. Congrats on your win
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Date: 4/21/2018 7:41:00 AM
Faraz, you've expressed so BEAUTIFULLY a man's heart who is truly in Love with a woman. I love the entire poem, but the last line, 'but my life is running through your breath' is superb. The best of luck in the contest and all the best to you. :) ~ Artsie
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Date: 4/16/2018 10:19:00 PM
Sure an endearing poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/16/2018 2:01:00 AM
Oh, I love these lines of yours Faraz, what a lovely poet you are who knows how to treat a woman. She's a lucky girl. Good luck in the contest....Maria :)
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Date: 4/15/2018 11:07:00 AM
A beautiful poem of love. I hope you find happiness with the lucky woman for you. Very nicely written my friend..Charlie
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Date: 4/13/2018 5:25:00 PM
Faraz, this lovely poem is written with a heart that knows how to love and appreciate a woman and lucky she is to have your devotion. Over looking grammar mistakes, as I am sure a translation, English being possibly a second language? I loved this and it is going into my faves my friend! : )
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