Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

The 4 Seasons

Winter is very cold 
the wind is bold 
snowman made the centerfold 
brown snow is old. 

 

Spring is in the air 
flowers now blooming everywhere 
watch out for a bear 
ducks swimming have flair. 



Sumner can be hot 
sailing on a yacht 
fresh strawberries I brought 
mosquitoes we will swat. 

 

Autumn also called fall 
sweater for my doll 
I need a shawl 
off to the mall.

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Len Gasun February 24, 2024 at 5:35 PM This is a fantastic and delightful poem of 4 seasons my dear poet friend Paula. You've painted it creatively with your words. A fave. Thanks a lot for sharing and congratulations on your well-deserving win! Hugs... Have a great weekend! God bless you always and your writings. Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2024 at 7:47 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be a fantastic/delightful poem. WOW!!! I see Fav??? Thank You... My heart has a very big smile on it. Your kind words always make my day happy. "Smiles With Hugs" Have a blessed/wonderful day.

Nancy Kaufman February 22, 2024 at 4:30 PM Dear Paula, I enjoyed this creative poem on the seasons. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Paula Goldsmith February 23, 2024 at 7:25 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons." Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Ink Empress February 22, 2024 at 4:47 AM Dear paula sweet and wonderful take on various seasons, summer one made me smile as i read mosquitoes, ah that resonates and is so well written for all the other seasons too. Lovely rhymes as well. Pleasure always reading your poems, congratulations on your well deserved win Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2024 at 7:43 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be sweet/wonderful/lovely rhymes. Your kind words always make my day happy. "Smiles" Have a blessed/wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 21, 2024 at 11:32 AM - Back with a well deserved congratulations, Paula :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2024 at 7:37 AM Great to see you back again. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons." Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 7:37 AM "3 Place" ~ The 4 Seasons~Date Written: 2/14/2024

Joseph May February 21, 2024 at 4:59 AM Congrats on your win Paula, Nicely penned Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 7:47 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons" write. I enjoyed writing it for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having it/for my placement. Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Valsa George February 20, 2024 at 11:13 PM Congratulations dear Paula on your win with your charming poem. Stay happy and get ready for spring ! Paula Goldsmith February 21, 2024 at 7:45 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be a charming poem. Yes, we must stay happy. Spring will be here soon. Hooray!!! I love Spring... Have a blessed/wonderful day............

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2024 at 9:36 PM Your poem is so charming. Congrats, dear Paula Goldsmith February 22, 2024 at 7:35 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be so charming. Have a blessed/wonderful day..........

Darlene De Beaulieu February 19, 2024 at 11:18 AM Hello Paula, Wow! You did all the seasons. My fav. Hugs. Enjoy writing away. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu February 20, 2024 at 1:38 PM Hello Paula, Yes you see fav. Your welcome. gla this made your day brighter. Hugs. I wish you a ble3ssed happy day. Hugs. /Darlene/ Paula Goldsmith February 20, 2024 at 6:05 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons" write. I see fav??? Thanks... That made my day very happy. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Silent One February 18, 2024 at 12:36 PM This one is awesome... well done Paula.. it really flows and rhymes well... Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2024 at 9:52 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be awesome/well done/really flows and rhymes well. Your words are always so kind. Thanks for that... Have a blessed/wonderful day.

Sam Kauffman February 18, 2024 at 9:36 AM Paula, this is a delightful combination of vivid images, "snowman made the centerfold," and the whimsy of each season! I agree with Evelyn, each verse is a happy thought! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings to you! Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2024 at 9:49 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "The 4 Seasons" write. I love to give out "Smiles." Oh yes, my fun "snowman made the centerfold." Hooray!!! Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 17, 2024 at 6:15 PM These smile inducing rhymes bring on happy thoughts, Paula. I adored 'snowman made the centerfold.' ;) Paula Goldsmith February 20, 2024 at 6:03 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "The 4 Seasons" write with my fun "snowman made the centerfold." Hooray!!! I love giving out "Smiles." Here is a Smile for you....  Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Brandy Nicole February 17, 2024 at 4:25 PM ' snowman made the centerfold ' This thought made me smile, Paula. Such a cute and clever thing to say. You've expressed each and every season in such a fun way. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2024 at 9:44 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be cute/clever. Also glad I made you smile. I love to give out "Smiles." Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2024 at 12:47 PM - An entertaining entry to this contest, Paula ...enjoy reading with a smile :) - Good luck :) - hugs Paula Goldsmith February 19, 2024 at 9:41 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your Good Luck. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons" write with a smile. I love to give out "Smiles." Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day..............

Gershon Wolf February 15, 2024 at 6:20 PM Watch out for restaurants that serve yellow or brown snow.' Sign seen in Minnesota. Keep smiling, gw Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:33 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "The 4 Seasons" write. Oh yes, no yellow/brown snow. Smiles... Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Kim Rodrigues February 15, 2024 at 12:16 PM Like me you brought humor in! I love yours! Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:30 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you love my fun "The 4 Seasons" write. I love humor. I want to put a smile on a face. Smile... Have a blessed/wonderful day.............

Jennifer Proxenos February 15, 2024 at 11:23 AM How cute, loved this poem and had to fave it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Paula Goldsmith February 17, 2024 at 7:28 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you loved this and found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be cute. Did I see FAV??? WOW!!! You have put a smile on my heart. Thanks with Hugs...  Have a blessed/wonderful day.

Valsa George February 14, 2024 at 8:26 PM Your poems are so cute...! You have child-like simplicity. The salient features of each season are presented so well in lovely rhyme. All the Best dear Paula.... Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2024 at 9:13 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be cute/child-like/lovely rhyme. Thanks...  Have a blessed/wonderful day.

David Fisher February 14, 2024 at 4:53 PM Nice seasonal picks in your poem, Paula. The snowman in the centerfold line is so witty. Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2024 at 9:10 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun snowman in the centerfold to be so witty. I enjoyed writing "The 4 Seasons." Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 14, 2024 at 11:55 AM Dear Paula, I really loved reading your poem and how you represented each season so perfectly. That is the talent of a great poet! - Blessings, Daniel Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2024 at 9:07 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note and for your very kind words. Glad you love this fun "The 4 Seasons" write. Have a blessed/wonderful day...............

Christina Bowring February 14, 2024 at 10:06 AM Such a delightful read dear Paula. Love how you have creatively covered all four seasons that offer different things. The imagery here is enchanting. ‘ Ducks swimming have flair’ - love that line! Really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing. Happy Valentine’s Day to you! Xx Paula Goldsmith February 15, 2024 at 9:04 AM Great to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "The 4 Seasons" write to be delightful/imagery enchanting. Oh yes, my ducks have flair. Thanks for your beautiful words. Hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day....  Have a blessed/wonderful day...........

Paula Goldsmith February 14, 2024 at 8:55 AM The 4 Seasons~Date Written: 2/14/2024