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The 1st Trimester

Champagne dreams, chaotic screams to new extremes as I push deep.. Perhaps a little leaked! I ponder laying nude, my girl is peacfully asleep.. Jared Pickett 4/13/2011 Asavvy1

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:49:00 PM

Jared,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/20/2011 7:06:00 AM

My dude...it's good to see you back...Like your new poems. Is there going to be a little Jared running around soon? lol Jim

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2011 12:03:00 PM

Sensuous and sultry Jared my friend.. luv thos champagne dreams .. and chaotic screams.. it all fits so nice...luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/14/2011 7:34:00 AM

Welcome back Jared!!!! Who is having a baby? Are you going to be a daddy? If you are congratulations. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/13/2011 1:03:00 PM

Very sensual and passionate expressions, jared, not seen much on pS nowadays?

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/13/2011 12:36:00 PM

This is the first of three poems that I will write... The title should tell you what it is in reference too... If not stay tuned and within the year you will most certainly understand...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2011 12:32:00 PM

Quite a passionate poem, Jared. Welcome back. Yes, it's been a while. Soupers come and go and return again. Nice to see you posting new work. Welcome! Love, Carolyn