The 16 Year Old Bullied

As I walk along the corridor
My hands at my sides 
Looking at the bully 
His hands big and wide 
He makes a massive fist 
And punches me in the face 
I hit the ground harshly with a solid punch 
For my  words they did no good 
Tried to walk away 
But I never really could 
His arm is stretched out wide 
Ready to go again 
I close my eyes tight and then I count to 10 
1…2…3…4…5…6…7…8…9…10….BOOM 
The taste of red filled my mouth 
As it leaked all over the floor 
I had lost a couple of teeth and of this yes im shore 
The pain was like fire that torched you if you touch 
Now im lying on the floor bleeding out my guts

Kicking and punching my stomach
He showed no remorse 
As the hits just kept on coming I slowly lost some tears 
I was like a dog crying for mercy 
But none was ever showed 
Chocking on my blood finally there came the blow 
He punched me right in the temple 
And the pain just went away as my soul left my body 
I slowly drifted away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/7/2014 7:24:00 PM
Oh Tracey, that was awful, my grandson went through bullying so my daughter took him out of school, she now homeschools him, I find it hard to believe that kids can be so bloody cruel, take care my friend...........Vera.......
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Date: 8/29/2014 10:20:00 AM
TRACEY, Thank You For replying to my comment :) LINDA
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Date: 8/27/2014 7:45:00 PM
TRACEY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Tracey Lawrence
Date: 8/27/2014 10:03:00 PM
i would love to be your friend and thanks for the welcome xxx
Date: 8/22/2014 2:46:00 PM
Tracey, this is sad, my youngest dealt with bulling last year. I hope this year it is different. It is a painful situation. ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tracey Lawrence
Date: 8/25/2014 10:01:00 PM
thanks for your feed back. and i hope your child is able to over come the troubles she faces
Date: 8/22/2014 7:54:00 AM
Oh that is rough, if this is real you have my sympathies. Very vivid, I could feel the pain. Welcome to poetrysoup. it will be a pleasure to read your writes :)
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Date: 8/25/2014 10:02:00 PM
thanks you very much
Date: 8/21/2014 6:25:00 PM
I remember how school was and is still. Welcome to PoetrySoup, Tracey ! You have a way with words we will all cherish. More, please !
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Date: 8/21/2014 11:39:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tracey - I choose your first poem :Dramatic verse - Well done ! - Nice to meet you:) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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