Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

That's Okay

Quiet questions live in my soul
Answers I've looked for an eternty 
See I thought it would make me whole
discovered theres no guarentee

Maybe I will change todays world
Maybe this world will change me
It might hold the heart of this girl
While it allows me to just breathe

And answers? If they never come
I've experienced life my way
Gaining my own kind of wisdom
And for me... ? You see that's okay

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John Fleming July 21, 2019 at 8:35 AM Most strongly agree with Andrea on this one, Brenda...yes, a lot better than just merely okay -- freakin awesome!! Love it. With much fondness. :) john Brenda Chiri July 21, 2019 at 1:27 PM John thank you so much for your wonderful comment!;) I always love your words! All my affection!;)

Andrea Dietrich July 18, 2019 at 8:34 PM not just okay . Awesome, Brenda Brenda Chiri July 18, 2019 at 10:21 PM Andrea thank you so very much!;)

Ralph Sergi July 17, 2019 at 2:15 PM A poem of wisdom as each day is a promise that everyday will be OK, Brenda. My compliments! Brenda Chiri July 17, 2019 at 6:33 PM Thank you Ralph your warm comment is very appreciated!;)

Heidi Sands July 15, 2019 at 4:01 PM Nice one Brenda! :) Brenda Chiri July 15, 2019 at 5:53 PM Ah Heidi thank you so very much!;)

Gershon Wolf July 14, 2019 at 7:56 PM I like the way the acceptances eases the tension, Brenda. Nicely done. ~ gw Brenda Chiri July 14, 2019 at 8:47 PM Gershon thank you so much! ;)