That's Me

It falls from my hands 
and scatters all around
one by one I pick up each piece  
my life comes together in this poem 

Joys and laughter everywhere
but a little sorrow hides under the chair
dreams and hopes desperately hang on 
the wind threatens to blow them away

Fragments of my memories lie here and there
a few unforgotten college days
some precious words dad had said 
angry face of a long lost friend

Strewn all over are words
well intended but misunderstood
words written for a poem, left halfway
some earnest attempts, some fake

If I were to measure these pieces 
Would there be more joy or despair
I really cannot say
But they make me what I am today.



Afroze Ali
Date:24th june 2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2013 at 11:37 PM
Loving this one again. BIG congrats . It was one of my favorites.
Ali Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Thanks Andrea :)
Mehta Avatar
December 24, 2013 at 12:21 AM
Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Afroze
Ali Avatar
December 26, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram!
Phookan Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 1:19 PM
Congrats Afroze on your superb win in this contest. This is seemingly simplistic but I found it so endearing and very beautiful... love, G
Ali Avatar
December 23, 2013 at 8:07 PM
Thanks Gautami:)
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Afroze. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:29 AM
Many congrats on your super win, Afroze with this honest rendering of who you are. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:31 AM
Afroze this is beautiful. The images you've painted are lovely. Many congrats for this win.
Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 10:47 PM
a greeat poem from you … perky cheers for the amazing award, afroze!! :) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:38 PM
I really like how you did your entry, afroze. You covered a lot of ground with just a few lines. REally great job. I enjoyed reading this one alot. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 6:12 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Afroze
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June 24, 2011 at 3:54 PM
Very nice piece of Poetry and a great win for you.....Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Congrats Afroze on another excellent win in this contest with this beautiful creative poetry luv.. enjoy .. poetic art..luv..
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