That's a No

As the lamp shines so brightly I sense her heartbeat potently She sighs with delight Turns out the light And says no, way too gently
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hopper Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 9:16 AM
Lol nice limerick
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October 5, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Great limerick Russell, rejection is never nice..
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October 5, 2017 at 3:51 AM
- Great limerick, Russell - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 4, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Better she says it gently than strongly!! Nicely rhymed, Russell
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October 4, 2017 at 3:10 PM
I enjoyed your Limerick Russell.
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October 4, 2017 at 3:03 PM
russell, you are om a limerick roll... what fun it is to see this side of you!... keep the lamplight glowing... wow!..huggs
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October 4, 2017 at 11:37 AM
Simple and honest. Good one.
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