That's a Long Walk

A strange old lady stopped in front of me
With a deep sigh she said, " It's a long walk "
One more sigh and one more minute of rest
She continued her walk

Who knows it is for another long or short walk ?
Who knows when she can make another stop ?
An old couple came and stood besides me
I saw weary feelings in their eyes

How long they travelled before they got this break ?
Where do they move after this rest ?
How far they have to walk and take small intervals 
Before they get everlasting rest in peace ?

Another old man came and greeted the couple
How are you ?...... long time no see......
Glad to see you again....... how's life ? 
Sorry, I have to rush

See you again if God wills
Take care ....have a safe trip home
He moved fast towards his destination
I wish he get there safe 

People are coming and going
Resting for a short while and keep moving
You see movements everywhere 
Movements give life to everything

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005



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Date: 4/7/2009 4:47:00 PM
Thanks a lot Aleera... I am very much impressed by your comments on my poems. You are a good reader and today you commented on four of my poems. Thank you very much. Now I am going to read your poems.
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Date: 4/7/2009 4:05:00 PM
I really enjoyed this write, it was great and I like things that make you think. This write does that, thank you for that.....Aleera
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