That Winter's Night


One winter night I waited patiently
for my long-time true love to come to me.

I sat, so snug and warm, and looked outside,
amazed at how much drabness snow can hide.

Much like a tapestry unfurled, the snow
enhanced the night with an appealing glow.

I walked outside to while away the time
till he arrived. The snowflakes felt sublime.

They landed on my face and energized
my spirit. Suddenly I realized—

My love was there. He came and took my hand.
His troubled look, I didn’t understand.

I said, “Let’s stay outside a little while.
The snow’s so glorious.” He tried to smile.

“You don’t seem like yourself. What’s wrong?” I pled.
My whole world was destroyed by what he said.

“It’s not because of anything you’ve done
that I’m not coming back. I’ve met someone . . .”

I stood mute as he vanished from my life,
this man who in just weeks would have a wife.

The snowflakes stung. The magic of the night
had vanished in an instant from my sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 10:11 AM
What a wonderful yet sad write/story. Hope Not true... Never know where life will take us. Have a lovely/blessed day writing away..............
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 6:09 AM
Paula, thank you for this great response to my poem. It's fiction. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:32 PM
Quite a sad verse Janice, hope you're keeping well. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Wishing you the same Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Thanks, Tom. I'm doing well and hope you are too. Merry Christmas! Janice
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