That Was Then, This Is Now

That was then,
When,
I played with a doll,
And used a pretend phone to make a call.
I had a favorite stuffed dog,
And had fun chasing a slimy, green frog.
I played dress up,
And drank from a sippy cup.
I learned how to walk,
And figured out how to talk.
I rode in a toy car,
But I couldn't go very far.

This is now,
How,
I go to work,
And cook my own pork.
I drive a car,
And drink at the bar.
I take care of my pets,
And have lots of debts.
I get dressed myself,
And reach the top shelf.
I Baby-sit my nephew and niece,
And travel to Greece.

Back then, I was a little girl,
Who loved to twirl.
Now, I am all grown,
And living on my own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/21/2024 9:20:00 AM
What a fun poem! Enjoyed reading it! It brought a smile to my face. Nicely penned, Jennifer!
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Date: 5/8/2024 5:37:00 AM
A lovely enjoyable piece Jennifer, as it shows how much progress you've made in your life and shows nice rhyme and flow too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/7/2024 9:54:00 AM
A wonderfully beautiful poem Jennifer. It shows how much you have accomplished so far. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 5/7/2024 8:37:00 AM
This is quite sad in a way, but also quite enlightening. You get to give your nephew and niece back on route to Greece. It's a win, win for me.
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Date: 5/6/2024 5:59:00 AM
I liked thos poem! I liked how you described the early stages and went into adulthood! Well done! Seems like life was simpler in the early times! If you get a chance check out my poems!
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Date: 5/5/2024 1:20:00 PM
Dear jennifer, this poem made me smile. For some reason, it emanates a hint of nostalgia in the most seamless manner. Love it especially the opening! Brilliant! So very well delivered for the prompt. Thank you for sharing this. Appreciate you supporting my contest too! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/3/2024 7:03:00 PM
Fun write enjoyed reading your poem here.blessings
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