That Was Then; This is Now

THEN I was carefree, and I wished to live forever, and yet always inside me was the knowledge that I would grow by learning more and taking on new responsibilities. Trials taught me that nothing in life is certain. I swam life’s flow in each new wave that came- as a wife, mother, teacher and friend. Some childhood beliefs I forsook. I hope I’ve evolved although in many ways I’ve stayed the same. However, I think I could accept death with grace NOW
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Johnson Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Hi Andrea. Congrats on your top placement. Indeed, coming to the place of acceptance is the greatest.
Dutta Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 8:15 PM
Big Congrats to win TOP. Hugs.
Croft Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on your win - beautiful
Emate Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 2:05 PM
This is beautiful and touching, Andrea. A well-deserved win. Congratulations on your top win.
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 2:57 PM
thanks so much.
Empress Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Dear andrea, always love a double etheree that flows so well and is evocative. This poem really has that touch and is so very soulfully sincere. I especially love the way youv written “ I swam life’s flow in each new wave that came-“ and that last line made me feel so much! Sigh! I have so much respect for those that are ready for death and to leave and feel like theyv done their bit in this world. Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your top win. Well deserved
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 2:58 PM
thanks, I really appreciate your comment
Maverick Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 3:14 AM
If in step with God...Its the progression If through Jesus..I must state that.! Rather than a bland agreement, well done Andrea.!
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thanks, Joe. It's all about belief I once had in my church. Even today I don't know anything for sure. Only that God is true.
Babcock Avatar
April 19, 2024 at 10:43 AM
The journey of life of having leave childhood behind and take adult responsibilities and as we get older look at death. Well done my friend. love phyl
Narain Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Nice Ethrww poem. You are too young to Die. Keep on writing best poems. GL in contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 5:37 AM
A journey through life, with its ups and downs. The end will see you enjoying bliss. Great especially if for the contest, I wish you luck. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2024 at 2:59 AM
- Great Ethree poem :) - When the time comes ... we don't have many choices, Andrea :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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