that was hilarious
We men on the sand kept our eyes averted and our laughter inside
As four corpulent women in super-sized inner tubes came in to ride.
When they jumped in together there was a tidal wave around us.
That was hilarious! Said my favorite friend, a cuss named Old Gus.
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