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That Night

He still remembers the screams of his beloved He still remembers her lilac perfume He still remembers her bright smile How she held him close as he lay there dying Her beautiful red dress framing her petite figure Her chesnut brown hair, always smelling like strawberries Her black heeled shoes making her as tall as him Her hazel eyes that shined when she saw him Now there's a crowd around them Paramedics telling everyone to make room They tell her to let him go so they can check on him She's vaguely aware of what's going on She only hears sound Everything is blurred to her She sees her beloved's mouth move She gets her bearing and ask "What did you say?" Everyone becomes quiet Suddenly there's no movement, no sound He says with his last dying breath, "Will you marry me?" Before she answers him, His body goes limp He has died in her arms With one word, everyone's life changed They barely hear that one word She whispers, "Yes" His ghost floats above her Whispering in her ear, "Forever I shall protect you my beloved"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/5/2016 10:10:00 PM
Lauressa Glover, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 9/4/2014 2:29:00 PM
Love it - excellent write! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Kika
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Date: 9/4/2014 7:53:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Lauressa - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/3/2014 9:48:00 PM
Hi Lauressa, thank you for the reply. You will like and enjoy this site. LINDA
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:18:00 PM
Hi Lauressa, what an excellent write this is! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and happy writings! Pandita
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Lauressa Glover
Date: 9/3/2014 9:33:00 PM
Hello Pandita, Thank you for the comment and thank you for the welcome as well :)
Date: 9/3/2014 7:21:00 PM
Lauressa, this is deep, hope all is silent now.:), A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Lauressa Glover
Date: 9/3/2014 9:32:00 PM
Hello Linda, Thank you for your comment. Everything is fine and I'm happy to make new friends :)

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