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That Magic

Eyes locked in dreamy gaze make Hearts beat in suspended time, When Love's magic fills the air Reason's in a trance. All rights reserved----Cynthia Buhain-Baello---05.24.15 The Dodoitsu is a fixed folk song form of Japanese origin and is often about love or humor. It has 26 syllables, four lines of 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables respectively. It is unrhymed and non-metrical.

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Robert Johnson
Date: 5/24/2015 5:34:00 PM
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I've been thinking much too clearly. :) Nice little poem Cynthia.
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 5/24/2015 7:04:00 PM
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Thank you Robert Johnson, my first endeavors on writing dodoitsu poetry. ~~~Cynthia
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Julia Ward
Date: 5/24/2015 12:35:00 PM
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I like your romantic poem very much, Cynthia. A 7 from me. Julia, :)
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Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Date: 5/24/2015 7:03:00 PM
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Thank you dear Julia Ward, I am glad you liked it and thanks so much for the rating.

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