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that look

she adores him that's why I'm here her equity firm executive parents don't the retired judge marrying them dear friend of our family leaves out "if anyone objects" just to see how she looks at him ...worth the 1500 mile drive ...worth pausing my journey ...worth wearing a suite priceless really to see my punk rock nephew (Red Tank--look 'em up) and the HR director of one of those Manhattan banks putting a ring on it sigh.. on Monday they'll be back in Brooklyn 2500 miles from others' expectations going to his gigs and being happy makes me believe in love to see that look wow you never know it could happen again and if it does I'll know the look I'm looking for but really just happy to be happy for them those two beaming through tears in each other's eyes should be on everyone's wedding cake yeah.. that look that's why I'm here

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Date: 10/8/2023 3:19:00 PM
ahhh...'that look' is a joy to see...and is worth many a journey. I liked the way this poem flowed and the underlying narrative. Nicely done!
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Date: 10/3/2023 11:39:00 PM
The layout and style of your writing is not what I usually think to stop and explore, but now that I have, I really enjoyed reading it. A very good poem. ~ Clive :)
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Steven Young
Date: 10/4/2023 12:55:00 AM
I guess it is a little unusual, so thanks for taking the detour.

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