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That Lion

In the sun's light I can see that smile. Then that lion with her roar with her claws with her pounding jaws with her everlasting bite she clawed my heart. Tears to my eyes as he says maybe Still not knowing what tomorrow brings. That lion and her claws smiles as if she has won. But I'm still fighting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/5/2011 12:52:00 PM
Very creative thoughts of rage with nice images, Tausha
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Date: 6/4/2011 11:00:00 PM
not bad but open up and feel the inspiration your life brings to you write from your heart not from your brain if you have to think about it, its not what its suppose to be if you write something and then later on read it and want to change it Don't always go with what you right first
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